Estimated band
Sample result6.5
Graded from the transcript only — pronunciation needs a recording, so it isn’t scored here.
Fluency
6.5
Vocabulary
6.0
Grammar
6.5
This attempt was graded from a transcript. Pronunciation is missing above because nothing listened to it — we would rather leave the row out than print a number we did not measure.
Verdict
You used the whole two minutes and finished your last idea instead of stopping mid-sentence, which is what Part 2 is really testing. The ideas were ordered clearly, but three linkers carried the entire answer and a few noun phrases lost their articles. Widening the linking is the fastest gain available to you here.
What worked
- You spoke for the full time without a long silence.
- The answer had a beginning, a middle and an end.
- Two topic words — “coastline” and “off-season” — were used accurately.
Say it better
I depend of my sister for the difficult words.
I depend on my sister for the difficult words.
“Depend” takes “on” (or “upon”) before its object. This one has come back three times in review.
It was very good experience for me.
It was a very good experience for me.
“Experience” is countable when it means a single event, so it needs “a”.
And then, and then we go to the beach and it was nice.
After that, we went to the beach, which was lovely.
A repeated filler and a tense slip in one line — “after that” buys the same thinking time.
Next focus: pick two contrast linkers and use each one once in your next take.

